Lyrical Evaluation

the lyrics to my chosen song 'The Spider and The Fly' tells the story of a spider trying to entice a fly into its layer so that it can eat the fly . however the Fly is too smart for the Spider and eventualy leaves the spider crying at the end of the version i have . However due to the genre of this version of this old nursary rhyme is rap which makes the hole song sound like a sexual refrence to a man trying to get a woman into bed. Refrences to the spiders bed are made in the lyrics to from the spider to the fly. This is the spin off that i am trying to create in my music video . with the use of fast editing and sexual refrences i think i could pull it off. the structure of the song however is typical of a traditional song because it doesnt have a corus however it does have a pattern to it where the spider speaks trying to entice the fly then the fly replies with a rejection to the spider . This interesting form of banter keeps the audience entertained because they want to know if the spider will succeed in his task.